Kŏngjù hé ài shì jīlì: Revision Suggestions?

Hello there!

I choreographed this piece this past semester and I’ve been given the opportunity to submit it in the Florence Dance Festival in Italy this July.  There will be a newly composed score and the costumes colors have been changed to nude.

Do you have any suggestions in regards to anything and everything?  What is the mood? What does it convey?  Where is the setting? Any criticism is helpful.

All My Love